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,her marks took 4 layers the way i did them,lol,thank you,i really do love drawing them and horse's ^^,i have to say i made her neck too short but i honestly love her design too much to really care,lol
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Very good. But may I say that those are not natural wolf markings. But you may be drawing an original species, which I applaud. Good job with the stripes so far! However...
-There should be a dip or a bulge on the stomach. It should usually not be straight. Despite that, the slight change of stomach width would give the species a more realistic feel, even if done lightly.
-When attacking, animals extend their limbs. This is so they can kick off the ground for a stroger attack and/or attack the enemy from a distance, lowerig chance of self injury. So, extend dem limbs!
-With the position of the head, the butt of the wolf(yus, that horrid thing we defecate from). Or you could change the head to a different angle. Or you could pronounce the twist in the wolf's body a bit more.
I think this will be a pleasing picture to see, as I can see with the progress thus far. I can't wait to see the final piece!
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