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I'll Get Ya by BlackMare234 I'll Get Ya by BlackMare234
just a WIP






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You want a critique? Well, let's take a look at this.
Very good. But may I say that those are not natural wolf markings. But you may be drawing an original species, which I applaud. Good job with the stripes so far! However...
-There should be a dip or a bulge on the stomach. It should usually not be straight. Despite that, the slight change of stomach width would give the species a more realistic feel, even if done lightly.
-When attacking, animals extend their limbs. This is so they can kick off the ground for a stroger attack and/or attack the enemy from a distance, lowerig chance of self injury. So, extend dem limbs!
-With the position of the head, the butt of the wolf(yus, that horrid thing we defecate from). Or you could change the head to a different angle. Or you could pronounce the twist in the wolf's body a bit more.

I think this will be a pleasing picture to see, as I can see with the progress thus far. I can't wait to see the final piece!
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naomithewolf Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
so good on the wolf!
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BlackMare234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
thank you :D,im really working on them,lol
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NaporieRizia Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I love the action of this picture. And now I see why you were having trouble with the markings. But they look great. And I love her expression. Goodness girl, you really can draw wolves well!
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BlackMare234 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
thank you :D,her marks took 4 layers the way i did them,lol,thank you,i really do love drawing them and horse's ^^,i have to say i made her neck too short but i honestly love her design too much to really care,lol
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NaporieRizia Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I can immagen. The look amazing though. I love the stripes... you know me and stripes :D

You're welcome dear.
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BlackMare234 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
thanks,now i have to work on how to shade it,lol,alas ive gotta go for tonight xD ,so i'll have to reply to those tomorrow
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NaporieRizia Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Awwww, so sad. But ok. Have a good nite!
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